Kingoffrogs

I totally agree with what you are saying, and I love the criticism. because it reminds me you guys take this seriously. however, you missed subtle clues I left in the earlier chapters, Arrakis will be split. it was always Damon's intention to do so. If you think about it, he needed this situation with the emperor to occur. And if he conquered Arrakis early on, he would be constantly attacked by the other great houses, despite how much wealth he has and how much control he has over Spice. He is a new power that is only proving its strength. And the other great houses will test him, and he does not want that for the fremen people. he realizes that most fremen are fanatics of the Lisan Al Gaib so he does what he thinks is best and allows for house Atreides to come to Arrakis. and he wants Paul to control the fanatics, whereas he controls the other side. There will not be one emperor; there will be two in the whole galaxy. This is why Damon doesn't use his Atreides name and why he has not married. Damon is more powerful than Paul, and his children will be vastly different from Paul's. we also saw an increase in power, and though I don't show it, he is omniscient. He claims to know all long before the creation of the sisterhood. and he claims to be the one who orchestrated its creation. and I mentioned he is older by billions of years. He is a being that has been waiting to be born.

if you read the book, the harkonnens used atomics to find maudib

actually i have to reread the book I wrote but i am thinking some time this week

he just needed a purpose

Yeah but not from his house he it’s more of a thing he liked to do

thats what it supposed to be, but it anchors him to who he is, he likes to do things that people dont do. which is who he is. A ridiculous person

It is showing the difference between him and his father

He has gold

Honestly I am working on it right now so that way you guys can have a better story

And I love that you did that. And I know you are not hating