TheCartoon
I love writing, I really want to show that I am a very creative person and capable of hooking you to my stories.
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TheCartoon1yrBalas JugdementCaleYou're right, thank you very much for the correction, I promise it won't happen again
Paragraf ini telah dihapus.- TheCartoon1yrBalas Scott47
I'm so sorry, I didn't know, my sincerest apologies
Two years had passed. Kiri and Haku had grown up quite a bit, Kiri was now twelve years old and Haku eight years old. Their relationship had improved a lot since they met, Haku had developed a very special feeling towards Kiri, it was not a feeling of friendship and much less brothers, it was a platonic feeling but at the same time it was confusing, was it love, joy, gratitude? He didn't know what it was, all he knew was that his life now belonged to Kiri, and if at any time Kiri asked him that he had to give his life in return... He did itit - TheCartoon1yrBalas mikedanger
He is not gay, read on and there is clarity on his relationship
Two years had passed. Kiri and Haku had grown up quite a bit, Kiri was now twelve years old and Haku eight years old. Their relationship had improved a lot since they met, Haku had developed a very special feeling towards Kiri, it was not a feeling of friendship and much less brothers, it was a platonic feeling but at the same time it was confusing, was it love, joy, gratitude? He didn't know what it was, all he knew was that his life now belonged to Kiri, and if at any time Kiri asked him that he had to give his life in return... He did itit - TheCartoon1yrBalas King_MaskCh 7 Chapter 7
- TheCartoon1yrBalas evolvedcat
Thanks a lot! I really appreciate that you are liking it, also sorry for the mistakes in the selection of words, I am from Colombia and English is not good for me to write but if I speak it, I will publish another chapter and take the rest of the dial to make a remastering to the other chapters. Thanks a lot.
- TheCartoon1yrBalas Bunnytaoist
Hebrew. It is a language that my grandfather learned in his childhood since he had to live in the capital of Israel, he assisted the Israel defense forces and I think he participated in a war called "The Six-Day War" my grandfather's battalion fought against the Egyptian air force and well... He retired from the army, met my grandmother who was a Colombian and they will get married and etc. I would equally love to serve in the defense forces just like my grandfather and that is why I am studying Hebrew with a private tutor.
Ch 1 Chapter 1 - TheCartoon1yrBalas BunnytaoistCh 1 Chapter 1
- TheCartoon1yrBalas SuryaputraKarna
Read chapter one and you will understand
N/A: Here Kiri's personalities will come into play. - TheCartoon1yrBalas RedMonkeyDog
I think you have to read the beginning of the story, there are personalities explained. I'm also sorry for the topography, I'm terrible at writing English but I'm good at speaking it in person (I'm a Colombian who is living in the Colorado Alps), I'm trying to improve, but one thing, if you don't like history there is no need to speak badly of my creativity. Thank you
N/A: Here Kiri's personalities will come into play. - TheCartoon1yrBalas Qavid
I'm too sorry, I'm a Colombian who is learning to write English, it's normal for me to make those mistakes, I apologize
"S-Si... This had happened yesterday, but now it is too serious." - TheCartoon1yrBalas King_Mask
Es que va hacer mujer. Perdón si ves faltas de ortografía en la traducción, supongo que estás leyendo esto en Google y usando la traducción que te da este mismo, espero que me perdones las faltas de ortografía, soy bueno hablandi inglés pero se me complica escribirlo.
Ch 3 Chapter 3 - TheCartoon1yrBalas Jaden_Sansbury0306
LOL 😂
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - TheCartoon1yrBalas AbyssalSora
I'm sorry, but many already voted out of love interest.
There are some who ask "Is Haku boy or girl?" You will decide, do you want a loving relationship between the characters? I warn you that this is a timeline, so there are very tiny things that they are going to do differently and one of those tiny things is the genre of Haku. You decide, I already give my vote. I want Haku to be the love partner of the protagonist, I do not know what you are going to decide, I wait for your answers. - TheCartoon1yrBalas Herohero
Don't worry, I won't force a harem, I know I'm a beginner writer and my English writing is terrible, I just want to make a love triangle almost the same as in the anime with Karin, Sasuke and Sakura, but don't worry, the protagonist is going to fall in love with Haku and nobody else.
Ch 3 Chapter 3