SwiftyXSwift

Have you abandoned kill the author

Please don’t quit because of the hate. Your a very good writer with a lot of talent. Keep it up and hone your craft. This is honestly one of if not the best fanfic I’ve read. Sorry if I overgrazed the story but I think it’s really good keep it up.

If this is spoilers then just don’t answer but are we going to see Sebastian when he was under the influence of Lucius or will it just stop when he gets confronted by Lucius.

8th kenpachi was kenpachi azashiro

Sorry if this is rude but do you have any idea when you’ll release the next chapter

Good story, just really needs an editor. Lots of little mistakes, not unreadable just annoying.

Does the writing quality get better. Because every other sentence there’s a mistake.

I didn’t mean to delete my text but I still stand by it the word choice is just very subpar imo. It really takes the immersion out of it for me.

I gave this novel five stars because everyone in the comments keeps saying it’s amazing and I’m only on the mid twenties so I’ll trust them on that. However I have a major problem with this novel that is driving me crazy because no one mentions it. The word choice a lot of the time is just awful it either doesn’t make sense at all or lacks any sort of flow. I would highly recommend hiring an editor especially considering people seem to enjoy the novel. The writing quality is just very sub par.

A marriage alliance they’re peasants how is that a marriage alliance they have nothing to offer.