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All living things improve their genetics (bloodline) and evolve according to this principle whether animals or plants, even viruses and some types of machine learning programs. We don’t need any data to know that if there were a “magic gene”, spreading it to as many as possible would result in higher quantity of, and stronger, magicals. Even if magic somehow negated all logic related to bloodlines, it’s canon that half-bloods are significantly more powerful than pure blood wizards

You junior has eyes but doesn’t see Mt. Tai…

Translation good so far. I think the researcher system cheat is very cool. The plot is pretty bad up to this point but there are only 20 chaps atm. Right now the MC is a student and so far he is fighting progressively stronger hyuga thugs like it’s a weak to strong cultivation novel. they send a jonin to cripple his foundation because MC crippled a junior etc. it’s pretty brainless Story is still worth reading though because his science research cheat is so cool. He uses wind release chakra to draw nitrogen from the air and then compress it for a freezing liquid nitrogen attack, and has plans to use lightning release for electrolysis to get explosive hydrogen moves

???? Both study ninjutsu…

None of that is correct. Kage is the leader of the village, not a power level. Even Kakashi with average chakra level can become a jonin or a kage, not to mention the might family. Amount of chakra has more to do with genetics and bloodline than anything. Next time just take 2 seconds to google the correct information instead of doubling down and embarrassing yourself further

The story is very clearly edited by ChatGpt

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Wow MC is so strong and still had to win by plot armor... Luckily splitting the girl who splits herself works for some reason, and she was kind enough to reassemble her body so it could get frozen. Actually now that I think about it MC hasn’t done anything to win any of the events yet, he just got carried lmao. Hopefully he does something in the championship fight

Bad review who cares if his eyeballs don’t generate enough chakra for you or what year the uchiha relocate. Is this the first ever fanfic you clicked on? So much yap and nitpick for a noob who think genin/chunin/jonin is a measurement of chakra

This is a very good fic, but it’s nearly ruined by “grammar checker” if you know what I mean. This story is already great and still has so much potential, I think that if the author went back to rewrite it to sound human it could be genuinely S-tier work. Still very much worth the read in its current stat, I’ll call it C+ tier. My only other complaint is that the MC named his character John Eldenring, but the author wussed out and refers to him as “tarnished”