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Penality

Penality

Lv2

To write is to speak from the heart, to speak from the heart is to be vulnerable, to write is to be vulnerable.

2022-12-05 BergabungGlobal
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  • Penality
    Penality3d
    Berkomentar

    this feels, odd tbh. been following the book thus far and this trajectory is just odd. and i hate that it's slow progression so far

    Ch 3150 Fractured Mind (Part 2)
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasi · Legion20
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  • Penality
    Penality3mth
    Diterbitkan

    Five chapters in and I am loving it. The story progression so far is easy to follow, leaving enough room for imagination. It is a beautiful read and is promising. Keep up the updates

    Escape System: Rise of the New Hero
    Fantasi · superAyan
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  • Penality
    Penality3mth
    Berkomentar

    Zero hesitation

    The second voice replied, "Yes."
    Escape System: Rise of the New Hero
    Fantasi · superAyan
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  • Penality
    Penality3mth
    Berkomentar

    wow, no tea no nothing.

    "Are you a model?! Then strip already! I've got no time! Deadlines in a week! Chop! Chop!"
    Escape System: Rise of the New Hero
    Fantasi · superAyan
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    Penality3mth
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    getting mad defensive

    Moving the eclipse-shaped mirror beside the tripod, I adjusted the slope of the mirror while admiring my beautiful visage – according to me alone, before whirling around to check my posture like a pageant candidate turning a quarter, a half, and finally a whole. I'm not like 'that'. I'm just focused and desperate.
    Escape System: Rise of the New Hero
    Fantasi · superAyan
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  • Penality
    Penality3mth
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    Uhuh, very convincing.

    Just to be clear…I AM NOT A PERVERT.
    Escape System: Rise of the New Hero
    Fantasi · superAyan
    detail
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    Penality3mth
    Berkomentar

    Choice of words says otherwise

    "ARGH?! WHY IS IT SO HARD TO FIND A NUDE MODEL?! IT'S NOT LIKE I'M GOING TO MOLEST THEM, RIGHT?! I'M JUST DESPERATE!" 
    Escape System: Rise of the New Hero
    Fantasi · superAyan
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    Penality3mth
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    noice

    Below the furious heavens, the land felt like it wanted to shake and express its grievance but stopped its desire as it heard the wail of a mother reverberating inside the tiny house in the slum area of the city.
    Escape System: Rise of the New Hero
    Fantasi · superAyan
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  • Penality
    Penality3mth
    Balas superAyan

    this means alot, thanks.

    Ch 3 Born Into Darkness
    TO BECOME A HARBINGER OF DEATH
    Fantasi · penality
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  • Penality
    Penality3mth
    Diterbitkan

    i enjoyed the perspective switch, the writing style is simple and easy to follow, the story progression feels slow and doesn't have any skips that ruin the reading the experience. worth a read.

    Feel The Rhythm Of Love.
    perkotaan · Winter
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  • Penality
    Penality3mth
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    what weird stuff???

    The classroom was neat and clean. We take the seats near the windows. Because you can see a lot of stuff outside. Fun and weird stuff.
    Feel The Rhythm Of Love.
    perkotaan · Winter
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    Penality3mth
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    the switch from narrator to character voice is a nice twist

    Her name was Arin. To me, she was the prettiest girl I've ever seen. It was late of April. Our teacher Ms. Ara introduced us to a new student.
    Feel The Rhythm Of Love.
    perkotaan · Winter
    detail
  • Penality
    Penality3mth
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    starts off nice, long chapter tho i feel like. interesting how the mc termoil is explained in first person .

    Ch 1 Choi Dae-hyun
    Feel The Rhythm Of Love.
    perkotaan · Winter
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  • Penality
    Penality5mth
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    this one i enjoyed writing

    Ch 3 Born Into Darkness
    TO BECOME A HARBINGER OF DEATH
    Fantasi · penality
    detail
  • Penality
    Penality8mth
    Balas TheLastRemnants

    I have no problem with the phrase, just the his bit... expected she voiced warningly.

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    Penality8mth
    Balas TheLastRemnants

    and done, thanks

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  • Penality
    Penality8mth
    Balas TheLastRemnants

    Done

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  • Penality
    Penality8mth
    Balas TheLastRemnants

    Glad you liked it

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    Penality8mth
    Balas TheLastRemnants

    He's trying to cheer himself up, so it's pale

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    Penality8mth
    Balas TheLastRemnants

    Thank you, I appreciate the stars.

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