DaoistnLjD31

First corn, and now you. I am really sorry. Guys, the tone of your expert advice can sometimes come off rude. With statements like ' Mc is stupid', 'The story is stupid', ' The story is becoming trash', basically nitpicking problems making the author's seem meaningless . If the are any problems, they should be conveyed with a respectful tone because author is not getting paid for his writing . Sorry for my rant, this problem has discouraged some new writers and has placed great stories like this and Corn's Fairy tail: Shinigami on hold. Peace out.

Very good book. Although it starts slow, by the 10th chapter, things start to heat up.

This is one of the scenes I don't understand.Garp is punching Luffy into wood but pieces of concrete came out.ILLOGICAL

No, seraphims are the leaders of angels in the originals source while archangel is the second lowest rank. The mistake in literature work where 'arch' means chief.

It doesn't matter with the byakugan, unless the strength disparity is enormous, a byakugan user will almost always win.

This is what we call hypocrisy .

Sarcasm.

Dude,your work needs some punctuations to prevent it from looking like a block of letters.

I don't know maybe his matured soul and mind affected his hormones. We never had an adult's soul in a kid's body, so we don't have the knowhow on this problem.

He literally said the symbols prompted him of the world he is in. Read carefully.🤓