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2022-11-28 BergabungGlobal
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  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax679 months ago
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    It's not that good but not bad either need more improvement's for the story anyways good luck author I'm sure you'll do well

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax679 months ago
    Balas looser_cuck

    update

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax679 months ago
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    don't drop it continue ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Š the shit is good ๐Ÿ˜Š

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax679 months ago
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    ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
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    nice book it's very similar From book i read I think it's called Twin Cities: Unlimited Rewards for the Beginning of the War

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
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    thanks for the update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
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    thanks for the update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
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    Yep this is a good one thanks for posting this story I love it so far good luck

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
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    Yeah another thing Author This story will be shit if you fcking mess up the harem bruh you don't need to rush the development of harem like goddamn don't make the harem a pokemon catching game like shit don't make escanor keep getting them girls so easy

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  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
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    Bruh everything Happens so fast like Goddamn almost every chapter escanor got a power up ahhahah Initially I'm Expecting Like there will be a training arc or something,You know something like a weak to becoming overpowered Escanor you know like getting to know his power but damnnn plus I think author need to slow down his moves in terms of romance I feel like its very rushedalthough in terms of story not bad but sometimes I cringed when I read some lines when I'm his son bullshit of escanor sorry my bad this is a good story but needs more improvement keep up the good work though I'm expecting more of your works being better

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