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Chaosscythe2hBerkomentarTruly a shame that it ended! But good job author-san!!
---One Piece: Dark Justice Spandam [END]- Chaosscythe22hBerkomentar
He reminds me of demurge or Diablo! Yandere!!!
It's often said that the strong are beautiful, and indeed, his presence, as if reigning over space, was simply enchanting. - Chaosscythe23hBerkomentar
Finally a protagonist that doesn't think with his d*ck!
What can I gain from taking such risks? Gratitude and goodwill from Robin? She may be beautiful, but unfortunately, the risk of my future plans being ruined is far greater. - Chaosscythe1dBerkomentar
I don't know why he suddenly respects him, Might guy is a person worthy of respect because he worked hard for his strength, toji was born with it!
In an instant, Onoki's respect for Toji rose several levels. - Chaosscythe1dBerkomentar
Great job on your writing author but I'm disappointed with direction of the story, I mean I don't get why you gave him all these cheats if you just want a character about chilling and strength, you could've just made him a OC super genius instead of a SI without memories contracted to to the strongest god, strongest phoenix, and strongest dragon, adding to that the strongest maid this trope feels like a patriarch or king in preparation, but now by removing him from the succession race you limited his future to at best a general used by the protagonist while being called the strongest!
"I heard what you said , so from now on I officially remove you from Succession race and you necessary role as a knight of the family from today onwards you will train with Luna until further Notice from me . " - Chaosscythe1dBerkomentar
Dragon of space, sick from teleportation! That is biggest joke ever! 🤣🤣🤣
Magnus looked sick and weak as the incident at the teleportation center made him feel bad . - Chaosscythe1dBerkomentar
I mean I like his laid back personality, but man have some DRIVE and AMBITION that is not dictated by the system!!!
Magnus did ask anything and just followed the group as he was yawning. - Chaosscythe2dBerkomentar" No, he is not! I will not allow this to happen, you are a bad influence for Adam!!"
- Chaosscythe3dBerkomentar
HYPOCRISY!!!
"I am calling you all for two important things, the first is that I will leave for the next two years alone, since I must do some important things and not be able to return for that time, the second is that in these 2 years, your job is to start making the order grow more in the sense of our economic power, social, etc.. " - Chaosscythe3dBerkomentarThe four girls went to wash up, while I left their clothes for them to start wearing, this was one very similar to mine, only its color was different.
- Chaosscythe3dBerkomentarThe katana formed in my hands and I placed it on the ground beside me then I moved on to the next item. a small, bluish-purple orb composed of a unique substance with a glass-like outer shell its power lies in its ability to sense the hearts of those around it and materialize their deepest desire. I made three of these in total.
- Chaosscythe4dBerkomentar
This is the PASSION I was missing in his relationship with Astrid!
And continued, "Passion, excitement, PAIN, pleasure. BREATHING!! Kol, I love you SO MUCH!", then she grabbed his collar again, and started kissing him. - Chaosscythe5dBerkomentar
If this is the type of naritive the author was going with I'd chosen a different backstory that truly centered around a person with strong willpower, for example a poor abused man that rises above all due to willpower and hardwork and after attaining the peak of the world was assassinated and died with no regrets because he achieved everything possible in a mundane world!
He didn't know how, but he had decided to rise above such a flawed system. Laws of Hell.? Heaven.? Men.? God.? Fu*k that.! He will never follow the laws of this flawed system. He will only follow his own laws. - Chaosscythe7dDiterbitkan
Was a great first 30 chapters! Then the ball drops and his parents start interfering with his life, first, his mother steals his philosopher stone then use the gold to fund the family's finances even though he gave them a better solution, and then refuses to fund his project with the gold from the philosopher stone that HE found!! But what makes me super mad is that they arrange a marriage for him behind his back and with no notice to him announce it to the world, embarrassing him in front of a party full of people!
- Chaosscythe7dBerkomentar
F***! This is why I prefer orphaned protagonists!
"Well, we'll see that later, I told you our finances don't allow us right now, not that we weren't going to do it. Now go to your room and you'll only go out for dinner." - Chaosscythe7dBerkomentar"Nothing really, I just wanted to ask for a break," Lucas was going to ask to retire, but after seeing this woman, he may have to reconsider his plans.
- Chaosscythe7dBerkomentar'Thankfully my dick didn't become smaller, phew, other things can be fixed with time, but this can't,' Lucas thought as he fondled his crotch, sighing in relief since the most important component wasn't messed with.
- Chaosscythe7dDiterbitkan