GearGod
I'm gonna be King of the Writers! (In Luffy's voice)
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yes, also if you noticed 'Matsumoto' translates to pine treeI wanted to go with plant based terms for the females
correct!
it's not bad on the first chapter, grammar could use an improvement along with more dialogues.
The plot isn't actually bad, I see the author put a lot of thought into this and a Naruto reincarnation with system doesn't sound like a bad mixBut the grammar needs improvement
Okay thanks so much for taking your time to read this, I really appreciate it and I want to do my best as a novice author so please support me
This is alright, I can tell you put thought into this while coming up with this and the story is okay. but you could extend the story to raise the stakes and make readers engaged.