Marty56

Hi guys you can tell me where i made mistakes i will try to amend a little in the up coming chapters, cuz this is my first time writing a story anfd you can give me ideas

Ok

Nice story Danny , but is dorian a really a mutant because he has boats inside of him. but the book is an awesome one. You have to release the the remaining chapters and i sure you will add romance

I love your story keep it up bro