Rakesh_Kumar_8224

it's good story but please watch game of thrones. use correct name of character it's confusing to read.

I liked the story concept plant vs zombie but please correct grammar

novel is good. but please keep cultivation away from Naruto.

thank you. it's good story

it's good fanfiction story. but author is not familiar with MCU or doctor strange word.

Author please watch doctor strange movie. Doctor Strange Uses A Mystical Sling Ring (not talisman) To Create Instantaneous Teleportation Portals (not dimensional gate)

mc is foolish. he killed elfs and now he is giving weapons to enemy and training then how to use weapon.

I liked no face slapping in this chapter

why u are repeating chapters

i love this story. but I have question when will mc will meet other characters