gaurav_Kumar_1424

How author felt after writting this

damn In all thosse purple items I want only this one '

wtf ,,,, why is he crying? what do you expect her to do with this money if not by things. Actually you shouldn't have given her so much money if you dont want her to spend so much

it is probably ....

true its like she was just using mc to get access of real world instead of actually liking mc other then admiring his nen skills but after knowing its all system related and have nothing to do with his talent she is not that admiring or respecting the mc anymore.

that was not good and its better for u if u just avoid it but well you have chosen this route anyways so u may as well continue and improve.

no more like why is this mc so stupid ...... and why the fuck he gets angry so easily instead of finding real solution to a problem. He is too much of a brute to my liking

true but not true at all if he have actually done this not so obviously like not running like a fool toward the door and instead waited for emma to enter and then he could have killed her

yeah I have a very simple Idea although its really far away but when Fujin fights Kaguya please give him her Karma Seal like boruto got killing Momoshiki also with the level of power Fujin possess right now its better If you take a 3 year long break directly to shippuden after completing this ark and directly show us result of his training effort against strong ninjas like Itachi and Pain and others. Also maybe you could include a love interest or focus on some of your other characters like hoka its high time you give the boy his desired revenge. Even though I know he will lose but most likely Itachi won't kill him because he is a Konoha Ninja and also please give me a practice match with Tsunade... I would like to see your version of Tsunade. Maybe you can start the next arc like that,,,,Fight to death with Tsunade

So he can marry with Hinata