The_lone_reader123

Sorry for the inconveniences we (male) cause

Thanks 😁

I am trying to make him a character like watcher in the marvel. And also his set of abilities prevent him from doing anything excessive and I can't give him more as anything more would be considered too much for the setting of the story

It is in the 1st stage. There are two more than 2 stages two go. It is just the basic form of graudastra. As the mortals can't adapt to the power of gods easily.

Waise thanks. I need someone to point my mistakes

Awakening is often accompanied by special effects

Agreed. I just thought about it too

Garuda Dev is not the Mount of Vishnu in Vain. He is the one of the strongest being in whole Universe aside from Trimurti. So how can it's bearer be weak. I will make him strong but now he already has flight, speed and eagle eye anything more would be overkill at this stage

I want to make a watcher(from Marvel) like protagonist. He will not interfere in the story and if I make him stronger than both Dev and Amrita, then the story will have to take place on his terms, which will affect its ending and make it just like other fanfics. I want to make it unique .He will be with them but just as a side character. And his power up Garuda Dev is not the Mount of Vishnu in Vain. He is the one of the strongest being in whole Universe aside from Trimurti. So how can it's bearer be weak

Hormones I think. Messed up his mind you know😅