FantasyTroll
I'm a fantasy troll, I live under the bridge of fantasy. It's my favorite place! I also love exploring alien crash sites occasionally. Aswell as jumping between a few, specific, multiverses.
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Ok bro, we'll see.
Your talkin' to a 500 year old emperor!
In real games like this (building an empire or similar), there's usually courting. Maybe the game had something like that, so you could raise favourability. XD, but I have no idea
The author said there's a policy for the first few chapters, I also heard that previously somewhere from another author.
I started watching that yesterday what a coincidence
Took me a while to see what side he flipped on, I'm still not really sure
Wellllll, she would have killed anyone who would see, no humiliation there!
What if he wouldn't?
The writing quality is good, with the occasional typo or normal misspelling of a word. The story progresses nicely, and I think the idea is great. Character design seems a bit bland, and I find it a bit difficult to imagine the characters the way I think the author intends. The world background also seems a bit bland, and although I can't put my finger on it, some parts feel empty or like it's missing something. Another note is, due to the title and how the story begins (plus the synopsis, naturally), Vorbuk should be the main character. However, he is HEAVILY lacking screentime, and most of the story's antagonists/obstacles are the prince's problems/enemies.
Your losing you
monsterous --> monstrous