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Thank you ^^
Screw the Sage
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I hope to read the synopsis of this book. Anyway, the story was good, even though it's only 1 chapter right now. I'm going to put it on my library list, so I hope you keep updating it.
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The MC was OP lol. hahahahaha
Ch 1 The Transmigration
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Heyo! Author here! I just found out yesterday about the Fantasy Carnival event here. So I decided to join. Unfortunately, I'm too busy, and this is a new book, so it has only one chapter. But still, I want to join for the first time, so I'll do my best to update this book to the fullest.
Screw the Sage: Suddenly Twins
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I like the everything! The plot the characters, specially your readers ^^ I'm amused that they interacting to your story by commenting and that's awesome :O
Red Blood Century
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Put it in third person, don't you think it'll be more interesting? The story was slow-paced, and there's a lot of dialogue, but that's okay. This is just the beginning.
A CEO'S Love Story
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The background story was good, you just need to properly write the past and the current situation. It kind of confusing for me. And also using the right punctuations, you really need to fix that. ^^
Antagonist: Season 1
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Proper use of commas. I'm not telling I'm really good but it helps me where to pause as a reader.
After a long walk she was able to reach to the town. It was a crowdy place , that's because it was a market place. Various traders were trying their best to sell their products. Some of the stalls were also crowed, but, even among this hustle and bustle her first thought was that if it was the right place she intended to successfully reach or not.
Antagonist: Season 1
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You can remove the parentheses, it didn't suit well for me.
(Going back to the story ,a week before) Sancia who was unconscious laying near the sea shore gained her first consciousness. The sun was shining brightly over her head. It took her sometime to adjust to the bright light. She then noticed the crashing sound of the waves.
Antagonist: Season 1
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Not sure what is a micro man.
However, when she reached at the entrance of the alley ,suddenly, a micro stopped and a strong muscled man put a handkerchief under her nose even before she could react . She started to lose her consciousness again. She was definitely kidnapped!
Antagonist: Season 1
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The story was good, the MC was OP from the very start because of the skills. The writing can improve some more to make it more interesting to read. Unfortunately I don't have stones left to vote, and I also add it to my library so keep it up and update it. more. [img=recommend]
Wandering through the star
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thank you, hope you enjoy it [img=recommend]
Ch 2 Screw the kid
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Gonna enjoy this lezz gooo!
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arrow?
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What a great first chapter :')
Ch 1 One: The beginning.
Unimportant book
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