BryndenRivers

poorly translated chapter

what a waste of a character... not even taking his debut seriously.

how does a black man get a red face?

Asians fucking love Kobe

When she gets cancelled Emile's gonna come forward and tell his story about how "Troy was the only one who looked out for me" 😂

Rhianna is such a baddie. Hold on to her bro 😂

Every time I read I'm enthralled, and every time I get to the end I'm pissed... so good job 😂

Awful name for a god. The Red God works perfectly fine. If you needed to change it, it could be The Supreme God. The only reason we call God "God" in our language is because we have a clear distinction that capital G means "The Supreme Being" while lowercase g denotes any deity. In a world without widespread writing/reading and grammar rules, calling him "The Supreme God/Being" would be more legit.

Was really hesitant to start this, figured it'd be a shitty translation or slow as hell but it's been perfect and so fun to read. I highly recommend you give it a try if you like the NBA!

Great chapters. Would like to see some more personal interactions with the team, either them giving advice or just talking a bit during practice. Also would love to see more media/individual reactions to his game. It would make the novel feel more fleshed out outside of the court and the MC's life. Fantastic novel! Keep it up!