Captain_BigD

Did I overcook? The recent chapters I feel like I overcooked too much. I made all might tell all for one that he is from another world and in the story all for one loses since that is something I would do in that situation to get all for one's hope down but I feel like I overcooked.......

Bro you should might as well fuck the girl's mothers

Man fr use any pronoun but not they it just feels weird it's your webnovel just make her a she or he no one cares but they just feels Hella weird at least for me

Bro wrote a whole paragraph describing a women............

You are right some kid hit puberty early and get stuck with that height for the rest of their life 😂

Will you kill them or not? Btw I mean everyone Yuji cares for. Once they die, tell me so I can start reading further but for now it's a slice of life with MC not training and winning only due to plot armour. Either it's that or I'm underestimating his training since he holds back.

Bro had a entire monologue. Touch grass man.

Honestly just not for me. The breaking up with Abby and everyone being so involved with Edward's life was annoying and the thing about how in everything Edward is just perfect is annoying too. The characters also don't act like they do in the show. I know my opinion really doesn't matter here because so many people like this garbage. Imma just leave the story is too cringe and boring I tried to give it alot of chances since I liked the concept but just wasn't for me.

add it to patreon where it is 10-20 chapter ahead for the money part

best choice if it gets worse just add your own mix to the story and change the plot into what you think would be best basically you don't have to follow the exact story just have it so it's as good as it is until now