Love_C_raft
sometimes it is hard, but have the courage to overcome the struggle, there are people of the future waiting for you, be it friends, family or love one. loneliness and depression may feel like a abyss but it is a hardest tribulation to overcome.
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Love_C_raft3dBerkomentarwhat kind of creep as* move is this.
"Forget it," Ailin decided. "It's only a few years. I'll take Rukia as my disciple when she enters the Shin'ō Academy. Then, after Hisana's passing, I'll bring Rukia back to the Kuchiki clan openly and have Byakuya train her for me... With prolonged contact, I refuse to believe Byakuya won't develop feelings for her."- Love_C_raft3dBerkomentar
bruh
Unfortunately, Ailin seemed to have forgotten that luck was luck, and strength was strength. Even with his exceptional luck today, he was easily suppressed by Haruko's absolute skill. - Love_C_raft4dBerkomentar
same vibe.
"Tick Tock Chuck." I smiled before I destroyed the camera. - Love_C_raft5dBerkomentar
what kind of anime weeb cliche bs is this.....
"I—I think Helena is a trustworthy ally, so I just..." Lily stuck out her tongue sheepishly. - Love_C_raft5dBerkomentar| A Loser… |
- Love_C_raft6dBerkomentar
same vibe
"...shake my hand." It commanded. - Love_C_raft11dDiterbitkandetailI Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be KingDerivasi dari karya · Fangrove
- Love_C_raft29dBerkomentarCh 79 Victory
- Love_C_raft1mthDiterbitkan
it needs improvements, there are almost no characters interaction and when it does it seems like 3rd person pov instead of mc, and you need to correct who is talking. plus saying out loud and inner thoughts, everything is very simple, no depths. the improvement you can make more dialogue between characters, and pov changes, you need to differentiate between changing scenes event and ongoing thoughts, English seem okay good luck.
- Love_C_raft1mthBerkomentar
please use " for talking out loud and ' for inner dialog.
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - Love_C_raft1mthBalas Chasing_Dreams
mean if the money and everything given by system is for the wife, he has no control over his own happiness, you are saying that money is no use to him, you are making him a pet just for a wife.
*Ding: It is good to see that host has such a drive to move forward, however, host should understand that without his wife, all his money and fame would have no use. So, please make sure you give her proper attention.* - Love_C_raft1mthBerkomentarThe system replied in affirmative, Hao Ren nodded, and said, "I would like to assign two points to charm and two points to intelligence, and keep one point in reserve to be used later."
- Love_C_raft1mthBerkomentarHe felt like the System scammed him. The system replied *Ding: If it was that easy to break the limits of mediocrity then you would have no need of me. Get real.*
- Love_C_raft1mthBerkomentarFollowed by a rapid fire of questions, "Who is it? Is she from Han Nation? Tell me that she is not one of those dolls that young people use, also it better not be someone online, Hao Ren..."
- Love_C_raft1mthBerkomentar
yeah! finally, giving basic ability and learning themselves.
The system replied, *Host, do you think that investment is only considered investment when it is too big? Learn to take baby steps first and then dream of flying. Your current bank balance is 98,000 yuan. Get yourself together.* - Love_C_raft1mthBerkomentar
my*
Hao Ren smiled in reply, and did not say much. Han Lingshi checked the watch on her wrist and said, "I will be taking your leave now, it is pretty late." - Love_C_raft1mthBerkomentar
okay I'm slowly losing interest, should have given the basic and train himself.
*Ding: To encourage the host to take the initiative, in engaging with his wife, the host is rewarded with Master Class Chef skills. You are now a master of Oriental Cuisine modern and traditional variants. Good Luck!* - Love_C_raft1mthBerkomentar
okay this went from 10 to a 100, what the heck happen to him working hard for it?
Hao Ren stood outside the building with a copy of contract in his hand when the system said, *Ding: It has been detected that Han Lingshi has accepted your suggestion, issuing rewards: One penthouse apartment in Rising Sun Towers.* - Love_C_raft1mthBerkomentarCh 26 Second blood