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spoiler alert with this new promotion feature new free members at patreon can get ch 112 within 24 hrs. you will find what you are looking for.
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Every story has some holes. Even the original classics have it. We should just think of the most plausible explanation and cut the writer-san some slack. if we keep asking why didn't Starlord wait to take the /0 glove off before punching Thanos we will not be able to enjoy the story. Writing is hard.
You are right. In the beginning, I set the tempo extremely slow. Slower than slowpoke. And I can no longer justify it by referring to myself as a new writer. I still can't, however, rewrite the past chapters entirely. It's too much work. All I can do is focus on the future chapters. But those progressing much faster than before, comparative. Actually, you can take a peek at my latest Chapter 112: Occupation hazards It's a promotion thing introduced by Patreon recently, and I set my latest chapter as a teaser for free members on Patreon.
i meant to say that Rasa died just before the exam. the excuse that Rasa was being controlled by orochimaru to give the benefit of the doubt to the sand village will not be as effective if the leaf is forceful to give them the blame.
i have the same thoughts. chakra cannot be infinite. even reanimated ninjas must have a source of chakra that is not infinite. source could be the sacrifice or the caster or both. can add nature's chakra or from impure world too but definitely not infinite.
Rasa's body was found in the desert after the events of attack on leaf. mean he was going towards the leaf.
It is a nod to my favourite fan fiction character. Go check out his work his pen name is DevilHex.
Thanks. in the beginning I was not that thoughtful to clearly mention that. Actually i previously named that chapter itself as Hex Devil to mention him. but it was deleted in the rewrites. my writing skills were subpar in the beginning. they still are subpar as I still get bad reviews for my writing. but as i improved I kept rewriting older poorly written parts so mention of Hex Devil was deleted.
ohh he will. it's not too far ahead when he starts making out of the world equipment.