Its pretty early into the story but I can tell this is gonna be really really cool! The writing quality is pretty top notch, at least for this sites fanfics, the story is drawing me in pretty well too and I like the character interactions and stuff. Interested to see where things go this seems really good.

pretty good, one of the better dbz fanfics ive read on this site, which is saying something seeing as how many there are on this site lol lol. Its pretty well interesting, good plot, decent characters, I like it quite a bit yeah yeah