Hi! Umm it's fine if you don't like the book. And, I do know it's pretty shitty because I've only written romance novels before this. System is something new to me.As for grammar I was in a rush. I started the book when half month of wpc has passed.Lastly, I'm not saying this because I'm trying to find validity in your eyes. Or, because I feel bad. You've spoken the truth that there are many similar concepts. But, which book doesn't is my question.According to your profile You've only read two books. Have you really read that much? I doubt. Please read books before talking about 9999 similar concepts You've read.Thank you for stopping by!