simp212

maybe I am, maybe I'm not, who knows? never checked really. but that explains so much about your tendencies, maybe you have a delusional disorder too? you should check that out.

great, so now you're using insults as self-defence, you look like a 'veteran' reader, yet your tolerance to comments are seemingly quite low, guess you're quite lucky as your story doesn't really have a big reach yet, otherwise, you'll burn out quickly.

so that was your alt account or not? cause if it is, it's rather sad for you to review your own novel using your alt account. now now, you said it yourself, your account name, the cover picture, your profile picture, all ciri. if your novel is not biased to her, then I don't know what is. and seriously, you just kept going, I reviewed it because I want it, and now you're salty, you said that reviews should be subjective, and I said my opinion, but now you're mad because I'm being subjective?

oh wow so that was your alt account. anyway, in my opinion, stories like this(built around the female lead and built around author's crush of the character) won't last long, and the quality will drop quickly by the time the MC peaked at their relationship with the fl, because the author tends to get bored at that time, as the 'scenarios' they've built in their mind have all been written. I hope that's not the case for you though. well, maybe you've thought of a lot of scenarios(I can tell, the profile picture, the name, etc), and it would make the story much longer and better. that's it for me then ;)

do you not read my comment? i said that not because of the situation, but because of the author's view of ciri as a whole, he clearly has a crush on the fictional character, i mean, look at the descriptions from the chapters before, and i'm annoyed by it.

you the author's alt account or something? I said that because at that point it's a bit annoying how the author have a clear bias towards ciri, how he clearly have a crush on the fictional character, how clear the reason he wrote this story IS because of ciri. and for a guy who strongly recomends that authors shouldn't do romance, you seem awfully bent on defending it, but i guess I do see that the romance is kinda good, compared to other story in this site at least.

do you even know how to write reviews? there are several categories of stars, i simply rated them based on my opinion, or do you also feel a sense of entitlement with my train of thoughts? reviews are opinions, based on how readers like it and don't like, while ratings are a quantifier based on the site spesification , i put 5 stars in writing quality because the grammar and wording are perfect, but I also put 3 stars in story quality and character development because the story bores me and I see no significant trait of the mc has that appeals to me. is it that hard to understand?

so? "may" means it has the possibility of it being the case, otherwise it won't be mentioned at all, but op outright denied it altogether saying that it's just "a thin sword with an edgy name".

i know it's wish fullfilment, but it's getting too smooth for the mc, no concequences at all, even the faith didn't bow down to Maegor the cruel for a long time before the high septon died, and even then the faith militant still rages on until jaehaerys reign. i see readers said that mc is hand holding the targaryens too much, i say he's destroying what aegon and jaehaerys built slowly with his selfishness and pride. tldr, i feel like it's getting boring.

the good, the bad, the meh. the good: 1. it's really well written, by that i mean the words are a bit "poetic" like a normal piece of fictional novel, unlike most of the stories here, whichis quite nice. 2. the "progression" of the plot is natural, like there's a reason ciri is there, notjust because she's there because the autbor wants mc to f her. the meh: 1. the author's a siimp, not the mc(at least not yet), but the author. if you read it, you can tell his bias against ciri. 2. now i might be a bit biassed here, but i hate when author does 3rd pov, yet they saw a character's thoughts on the dialog format instead of good ol exposition. i mean if you want to do that, justuse a 1st pov, or switch between scenes. the bad: 1. i don't know if it's just me, but the story... just don't really hook me, maybe I was thrown off by that prologue, but who knows. 2. in the prologue, the mc suddenly thought of something that feels like the author just ripped it from the wiki, andpaste it to become mc's thoughts, it just threw me off a little, likeat least make it like he's talking to himself, not thinking about it to tell the reader about the lore. --- there's one more about the author suddenly name dropping ciri without her introducing herself, but I don't know where to out put it tbh. overall, an average to decent story, should read it to see if it fits your taste.