Paparipi

Start VERY GOOD but then writing quality dropped.. CRASH.. I bought hundreds of chapters, thinking it will be good until the end, but disappointed in the middle. I read until ch 199, and then I decided to drop it. It was really good until the brotherhood arc. Entering this arc, the writing suddenly going haywire. Don't know why? The author change? Or stop using AI? or what? Suddenly MC become stupid beyond recognizing. And the story goes everywhere that is not even make sense. Hopefully next book author can be consistent and do better. Really have good potential.

This kind of story is for after the war. Not in the middle. Its like author just want to add something up to make it longer.

What's all this dialogue? Doesn't add up anything and most of the time making the story goes out of the main story. Starting to get bored with this.

Is this still going? How many chapters per day or week?

This is repeated too many times

How can there be two Yu? Who? Yu? Or You? Lol, is this Rush Hour or what?

???

Repeating this again and again is quite tiresome to read...

It must be a very slow motion punch...for people to have converse in such length, and still it hasn't connect...

Sedan, as in.. Black Cadillac?