Oromas

This is worse than any of his previous novels, is very preachy, barely has any of the same level of humour, and is mind-bogglingly stupid to the point that it makes me want to drop at a lot of points, read chapters 43 and 51 to see what I mean.

Ayo where you go bro, you don't just tease and then dip like that, give us the full goods. This was actually going well, why you leaving in the middle of lemons and blueballin' like that :(

maybe delete this one and repost the chapters under a new fic with a different name, Here Comes Fire is kind of misleading, apart from that 10/10 writing quality and story

+1

Writing a review because this fic can't get into the power rankings unless it has enough and I want that sweet sweet 10 chapter mass release :)

I didn't mean the YourFather guy lol, he wrote his review after I wrote this and he actually has some valid points soI dont really mind. There was another guy who goes around giving 2 stars to every novel he reads (hence the 'r*tarded troll' part) but he deleted his review thankfully. Really hate that guy, he did the same thing to Game of Thrones: The Northern Realms so when it got an official eating it was like 4.1 even tho it's a pretty gold fic.

Literally everyone loves this novel there's just one r*tarded troll who gives 2 stars to every novel he reads bringing down the ratings. BALANCE IT OUT BROTHERS.

is this dropped...............pls no........this is actually a gem I've never read a pokemon fanfic as good as this one..................moarrrr

Only giving it three because I tired giving it 1 star and 2 star but the reviews got deleted. Rating went from 4.4 to 4.83 in 1 hour...damn that's some real Harry Potter magic right there. I dropped it because I couldn't even get through the first 10 chapters, and I didn't put up a review back then because I didn't think I was qualified if I hadn't read the whole novel. But I absolutely DESPISE authors who delete bad reviews, so here we are.

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