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Raw plz

I know I shouldn't judge this too harshly but This is really cringe!! 😑😑 The story development was not spontaneous and the writing was passable. Too many sentences that are grammatically incorrect. I don't know if this is the author's first time writing but so far the story was passable or nuetral. Continue to write more! I hope my opinion will not stop you to continue with this story. Eventually, You'll get there!!

The story was interesting! To all the transmission story I've read so far, this was amazing! I hope it will get updated sooner! Wish u all the best!

I really love the story!! Been waiting for an update less than half a year now. Hoping it will be picked and will be updated!!! 😌🙏🙏🤞🤞🤞