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After reading up to chapter 112, I must say there’s a clear improvement since chapter 37. The flaws I had pointed out earlier are gradually fading, which shows remarkable progress on the author’s part. I especially appreciated the more mature tone the story is taking, making it significantly more captivating and thrilling. The side plots are well-integrated, and the overall pacing is better managed, making the reading experience more fluid and immersive. That said, I noticed that the pacing is sometimes a bit too fast, which can give the impression of skimming over important events. Taking more time to delve into key moments could make the story even more impactful. However, there are still some areas that need attention. While the characters are gaining depth, they sometimes lack a unique spark that would make them truly memorable and loved . Regarding the protagonist, although their growth is noticeable, their traits still feel very human, making them seem less divine. This is understandable given their origins, but I hope to see a more marked transformation in the upcoming chapters. In summary, this story keeps getting better, and I’d like to congratulate the author on their work. That said, one word of caution: it would be a shame to get lost in the increasingly complex plot. Perhaps having a detailed plan would help maintain coherence and avoid losing focus. Lastly, a personal thought: I’m eagerly anticipating the arrival of romance! PS: I sincerely hope this novel won’t end up abandoned, as happens with many others. The potential here is great, and it would be a shame not to see this adventure come to a brilliant conclusion. Kudos again for this wonderful progress, and I’m looking forward to reading more!

To be honest, I was pleasantly surprised by this story. Despite some flaws, this novel brings, as mentioned in other comments, a breath of fresh air to the genre. I want to congratulate the author for their work. Now, let’s move on to a point I didn’t like. The characters are not well-developed and seem bland, lacking any real emotion. I know it’s challenging to improve in this area, especially for a beginner author, so keep going—courage! Another aspect I personally don’t like is the protagonist’s overly childish personality. I don’t appreciate a god having such an immature character. I understand that it can bring comedic moments, but it’s not my cup of tea. Finally, this comment was written on the spot right after I finished chapter 34. Maybe in the next 100 chapters, this feedback will become irrelevant.

To begin with, I like this novel whether it is for its characters or its story, that is why I want to congratulate the author for his work (and please author MORE ROMANCE between Jash and Ziva). Now, let's get down to business, and to the points that disturbed me. I found that the closer we got to chapter 200, the more the interactions between the characters seemed bland (I don't know if it's just an impression or me because I'm not used to this style of writing). Which I find quite unfortunate, because it makes the characters seem banal like robots. And I don't know if it improves after chapter 205.I hope this improves, because for me it is a key element to differentiate a good novel from an excellent novel. Even if this defect persists, it will not prevent me from continuing to read this work. Here is the end of the review that can be considered a little short, since there is only one point to criticize. I wish the author good luck in his work. Ps:English is not my native language

small personal criticism I unlocked the chapters up to chapter 59, and I find that the interactions between the Mc and FL are a bit emotionless. The same goes for the other characters. I don't know how to write a novel so I can't give advice but I will still make a little aside on this problem of lack of emotion, of humanity for the characters. Otherwise good job

I just started this story and after reading the first few chapters I immediately fell in love with the story. The two main characters are endearing and the story is interesting. Good job author, I hope this story doesn't get abandoned

I loved this novel good work author

I love this story. The novel has great potential. The author does a very good job. The only problem for me is the fear that this story will be abandoned. Let's hope that the author will manage to conclude his novel.

interesting, looking forward to the next chapters

the beginning after the end it exists in novel and in manhwa

I decided to re-upload the review after reading more chapters. good novel a tragic beginning which creates empathy for the reader, endearing characters. But also excellent update stability. But I find this novel quite childish, the first chapter shows that the mc is a bit naive. It's weird because I'm used to cool, cruel, ruthless Mcs. As said in the other comment, there is a lot to improve. Ps English is not my mother tongue so sorry for the mistakes