hmmm, interesting concept. I'll give you a five, I like where this is going, I like this war themed book, and I especially like the dystopian vibe, keep it up!

thanks :D

hmmm very interesting concept, I like where this is going. All I can say is keep it up. I'd really like to see more of this because this is pretty cool. Really looking forward to more. Your descriptiveness is also really captivating, and your grammar is pretty good. I'll rate this a 5.0

hmmm interesting...

thanks!