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I hope I'm giving an honest review of my own story. The author is here to write a review. I would like to share a few things with you. 1. My writing skills are not particularly impressive, but I am doing my best to improve them, even if I fail every time. 2. I hope this story does not disappoint anyone. I will try to make it better. If it disappoints you. 3. My way of expressing these expressions of characters is honestly unrealistic, but I do try my best to show it the best I can. 4. The story is kind of going slow, and yes, two chapters are being released every week, pardon me. Important things. 1. I would like you to suggest abilities for characters, side characters, villains, and side villains, as well as involvement in the story (it looks both exciting and terrifying). 2. Your feedback on my English and his story is required. It would be an honour if you do so. 3. If there are any questions, please ask. More later on... Author out.
To share a few details, I must give a review. [This review is 80% honestly that's why it's only 3.8 stars] 1. The writing quality is not that great but I'm trying my best to make it better. 2. If dialogues aren't that enjoyable or understandable kindly do share them with me. 3. since English is not my native language I'm not good with it (tbh I'm not even good with my country's language in writing) That's why I request your feedback on this story. The following is what I wanted to say. The pace at which this story is developing suggests that it may take some time to reach where the MC meets the weakest solo leveller. 2. Please suggest some antagonists, dungeon monsters, and supporting characters. with a few skills suitable for a main character or any supporting role. (you can tell in the review or can comment in the chapter) 3. If there's any question you can ask me in review or chapter comment. Author out.