Holy_Gull_1843

So basically the classical "just wait 40 chapters for the characther development"...lmao this guys

Fume ultra greatsword

You know what problem this fic have right now? The MC and Lack of interaction on his part. Example: imagine if a guy make a RWBY fanfic and never interact with the well know characthers. Boring right? Yeah yeah MC didn't want a new life...but bro people read fanfiction to see new and better interactions, a better story, a better solution to problems. You are following the flow too much...having inmense power to change it for the better... Especially in RWBY since the series after season 3 is just trash, thats why fanfiction shines bright with RWBY. The dull and bland personality of MC gets old really fast, boring as fuck, one strong point of RWBY is the characthers and his interactions...you are not delivering in that. I don't see much the "fun" in this fic as you put it in the first chapter to be honest. And what the fuck is that thing of "if he dosen't draw Excalibur he can be damage" ??? You didn't nerf the sword but somehow you have to give some asspull nerf. Mc is OP or not, pick one. I will not talk about the whole slave system. Old cliche trope that need to be forgotten already. I give you one star more because at least you didn't nerf Excalibur.

I feel that "i love you" good chapter

Average webnovel reader lol

lol

bro is walking on thin ice

Here it comes the clicheeee

To be honest you can pretty much one shot Voldermort with the sword, harry potter magic system is weak and stupid, 0 chance agains you

Classical "i reincarnate in a op character but im nerfed"...bro common stop doing bad tropes in fanfiction, authors need to do better.