TheOneWhoKnocks

Maybe he meant when was considered a villain?

Did you not read the chapter?

Yeah, that makes sense. It’s not a bad thing, but it might be worth loosening up the dialogue a bit so it feels more natural. Just something to think about.

This chapter has potential, but it’s being weighed down by stiff dialogue, excessive narration, and a dramatic main character who overanalyzes everything. If you focus on making the dialogue sound more natural, trim unnecessary words, and let Megumi’s knowledge flow more smoothly into the story, it could be a lot stronger. If the writing keeps up this overly dramatic style, it could get exhausting fast. So far, the chapters also feel like it was written by AI

Let my boy take a break 😭

Will it be a synthetic kyber crystal? Or will it be a real one like Obi-Wan’s?

They done got Mai and Ben 😭

So that’s his hero name? And poor gramps 😭

Wonder what his hero name will be