Vennom

Nice work, but requires some polishing. 🫰 Keep the passion burning, future great author

This is a review when the book is at its early days. Writing quality, 4 stars. I took away one star because in chapter two, I felt like the dialogues were very sharp, but not in overall. Story development, five stars because there wasn't deliberate words dragging over a single scene, events are well sequenced and related to one another. Honestly I feel this is where the author expertises, considering this is her first work. If she could emphasize on putting more effort towards story development, her talent would be pronounced. Character design, two stars. I couldn't understand the goals of the characters, their motivations and they lack distinctive mannerisms. Update stability, five stars because it can vary. World background, three stars. As said, story development is the author's main strength. The world background... Well places were mentioned. I hope this is helpful.

F*ck....

What's wrong with this Princess? She didn't want to be captured by a handsome dude? I thought that's what she wanted, so why the panic?

What a disappointed you are

damn

😂😂😂

For an Ogre, he's handsome

Yes of course 😂for peace and unity 😂

Yeah. Thanks for the chapter