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nope, that was cringe 😅. sorry. reminded me too much of my pubescent state of mind. lol. would have been alright if it's just the mc as he is a teen. but even the adults around him lack a feel of maturity. they come off as shallow. this typebof development might be alright for boys around their early teens tho
i feel like the author may be a younger guy in his late teens or early 20s. or, can also possibly be someone in his late 20s to early 30s but has had limited life experiences. considering the story flow so far, there are many moments that felt abrupt, at times unreasonable, and scenes which come off as chuunibyo-ish. Its like there is some impatience and eagerness to jump to the fun bits. of course, i could be wrong but it just comes across as that for me. the writing fundamentals are still alright though. although the story telling and development needs much work, i feel like there is potential for the author's future works. i will try to read a couple more chapters and see how it goes. hoping this could still be saved moving forward
The premise is really interesting and has a lot of potential. However, reading thus far, I am a bit disappointed that not much space has been provided to build up the story's foundation. It was as if the author just gave us a quick summarized introduction just to get it out of the way, allowing him to proceed to the echii and power grab stuff. I will still read a couple more chapters just in case it gets more interesting though.