webnovel
1704431408949
BrandonCH_7847

BrandonCH_7847

Lv13

hi my name is Brandon. I'm new to webnovel in terms of making my own fanfics. but I've read many stories on here that have inspired me. I even hope to make a living writing fanfics.

2022-07-21 BergabungUnited States
-d

Tulisan

325.4h

membaca

1810

Membaca buku-buku

Lencana

4

Momen

180
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas Dragonlord89

    good point. I'll fix that in the next chapter.

    Houzu could feel the eye siphon off his chakra. A typical side effect of using transplanted kekkei genkai.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas _un

    oh okay. are you asking if he can turn on and off his cursed speech technique?

    Ch 27 Chapter 27 - Transplant
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas _un

    I'm honestly unsure. he's not a full blooded uchiha...

    Ch 27 Chapter 27 - Transplant
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas Omnihakashin

    it's the result of both chakra and cursed energy combining into one.

    Ch 27 Chapter 27 - Transplant
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas XtrEEm

    that's... actually brilliant!

    No doubt they could sense his overwhelming amount of chakra. Even though the old man taught him to suppress it he never bothered to in order to show his 'superiors' how inferior they were in terms of their power. Striding cockily passed the receptionist she merely trembled while pretending to conduct paper work.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas XtrEEm

    I edited ch.18 to not rid his chakra. there's just too many useful techniques he could utilize.

    No doubt they could sense his overwhelming amount of chakra. Even though the old man taught him to suppress it he never bothered to in order to show his 'superiors' how inferior they were in terms of their power. Striding cockily passed the receptionist she merely trembled while pretending to conduct paper work.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas Kira_47

    The Sanin mourned for those three for years believing they were killed during the war. Even during his fight with pain he truly cared about the man. He even did everything in his power to not harm konan when he was caught by her.

    Ch 25 Chapter 25 - Got a jar?
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas DeathE

    thank you

    Ch 24 Chapter 24 - An inuzuka's thoughts
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas Sephtis1303

    ch.18

    Even his chakra had soured leaps and bounds compared to his former reserves he had the day they all left for their assignment. For the next hour the young lad retold his experience throughout the mission. To the arrival in the capital, attending the daimyo's banquet and lastly fighting and his eventual capture by a masked man bearing a single hole for one eye that bore a sharingan.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas

    I made changes to the former chapter.

    Even his chakra had soured leaps and bounds compared to his former reserves he had the day they all left for their assignment. For the next hour the young lad retold his experience throughout the mission. To the arrival in the capital, attending the daimyo's banquet and lastly fighting and his eventual capture by a masked man bearing a single hole for one eye that bore a sharingan.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78471mth
    Balas DeathE

    yeah...had a harrowing time. dog passed from old age, had to schedule her cremation. Delt a huge blow to my inspiration and mood to write. but I'm back now...

    Ch 24 Chapter 24 - An inuzuka's thoughts
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78472mth
    Balas Tykevious_Draughn

    i honestly don't know... I'm just using the design.

    He would be lying if he didn't consider her pretty. She bore white finely combed hair that draped down to her shoulders. Her eyes were a dark violet color that concealed her true emotions and her inner pupils were white instead of black. To top it all off she wore simple smile adorned with red lipstick.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78472mth
    Balas Simone_hanmakure

    No he's just paranoid and a bit blinded by his loyalty to Jiraiya and the prophecy.

    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78472mth
    Balas THEBADger

    I'll do my best to try to do more chapters but I can't promise anything. my work schedule is tedious right now.

    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78472mth
    Balas luisfer

    his appearance will include wild dark green hair befitting a saiyan with black spots similar to perfect cells carapace design. Topped with handsome features and eyes are a violet pink. that's what perfect cell's eye color is if I remember correctly.

    Buku ini telah dihapus.
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78472mth
    Balas Grizz_Rex_89

    yes

    "Now this....this is home." He smiled as flowers bloomed all over his massive achievement. The surrounding area was also affected by the super structure as not only flowers bloomed... but dangerous cursed flora as well.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78473mth
    Balas Binge_Reader69

    no... he wants to be seen.

    Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78473mth
    Balas SlothfulSinner

    writing the next as we speak![img=recommend]

    Ch 18 Chapter 18 - The festival
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78473mth
    Balas IceMonarch

    yes. overall he does look human. just with bone white skin, Hanami's entirely black arm and jogo's black teeth.(it doesn't mean his teeth are rotten.)

    Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail
  • BrandonCH_7847
    BrandonCH_78473mth
    Balas Honoured_Writer

    oooh. need to fix that[img=nervous]

    Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
    Naruto: the forsaken
    Komik · BrandonCH_7847
    detail