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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Balas Drei05

    i just read the first chapter and the story is interesting. i like your cover too.

    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantasi · Drei05
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Balas Arlemit

    i read the first chapter and wow!

    Nameless King
    Fantasi · Arlemit
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Diterbitkan

    [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] this romance story is well written, i like the female characters, the conflict needs development, and i want to know if the ending will be sad or happy

    Story close
    Masa Muda · Account_nolonger
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Balas Account_nolonger

    Thank you for taking the time to read[img=recommend]

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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Diterbitkan

    I read the first chapter, and I knew this would be a great story. I like the way the author explains it. The story flows and builds well. Only a minor grammatical error, but overall excellent work!

    I'm an Automaton, That's Right!
    Fantasi · NAF12
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Balas aleksandra_pano10

    thanks for your honest review :)

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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Diterbitkan

    great story and i like MC and genres like this. nice writing style but need little improvement about punctuation, the paragraph long, and the number of words per chapter is also comfortable to read,

    My throne
    Sejarah · aleksandra_pano10
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Berkomentar

    you have great story and i like the MC character. But for dialogue, you need to put " between it. keep writing!

    Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
    My throne
    Sejarah · aleksandra_pano10
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Berkomentar

    great story

    Ch 4 Third Phoenix Clan
    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Seni bela diri · Awespec
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Berkomentar

    i like it. keep writing!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Endless Dào
    Endless Dao
    Fantasi Timur · Heartless_Qi_
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