fiction_writer

Did you drop this 🙃🥲

Technically, you did mention female characters are forced to have sex with mc because of system.

Pls forget logic before reading this or else you will suffer brain degradation.

Is this translation????

Just mention it

Story premise was interesting and world building also good since it takes inscription from other works, but most of the actions mc takes is downright idiotic and short-sighted. battle and war sequence is also extremely lacking, everyone fights like they are in Pokemon battle or in term based battle, even war is done is same way.

What kind of idiotic war this is, your defence is about be breached and no one's does anything except waiting.

This story is about godly talented mc with simp personality, who knows the plot still married bibi dong and is suprised she is obsessed with xioagang like dude it's idiotic. And he knows the original story and did not do anything be it changing the direction where spirit hall will be destroyed or changed anything in that world, everything is same and canon with a tagon

Ttfc

Ttfc