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Sry, what do u mean?

What kind of pattern if I may ask?

is it that bad? Man... maybe I need to get a break with femala character(s)

The Prulde!

Sutando datto?

Trust me. B4 I published, I re read the entire chapter many times, but sadly many caught me off guard (inc. card's effect).

Typo, sorry

You're right. When I re read the story, I've found so many typos and others.

and remember only real men play Watapon

Actually he is an italian, based on what I know of him. Sadly, I'm not an italian and a newbie. So I use Ai, Moi, Mei for dramatic dialect purposes. Oh and also some translated words from EN to ITA