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Man, didn't I explain that he could've gotten another God's authority to hide that exact problem?
My free editor is back [img=update]
Time Skip ๐ถโ๐ซ๏ธ (The other characters ain't gonna wait for the MC, plus the MC has already shown and cleared some places and changed the time line)
I will, don't you worry, I'm getting the proper outline for it now and stockpiling chapters (which just means I'm writing loads of chapters before I post them daily)
He is also the God of Mimicry from my research, most Gods have other titles other than their main ones that they are known about
[img=Speechless] Sorry to hear that but I am trying to improve my writing style since it has been one of the main things that people have said about my works, so make sure to continue reading if I actually ever improve, also I am wondering what you think about the story and other parts other than than writing quality?
Welp, I completely forgot about that ability while I was writing, thanks for reminding me of this, I'll be adding it back in with some nerfs for ya
I'm flash paced my friend, not fast xD
The writing quality itself could be better in a few ways like fixing a few grammar mistakes here and there with also some extra spaces being used in a few of the paragraphs but the usage of words are definitely good. The story development seems a bit slow paced as to how I see it, but I am used to fast pace but I don't know myself but France is definitely having a hard time with Noelle's body and it also seems that the others characters in the story don't trust Noelle with even a single droplet which makes it hard for future development. The rest like character design and world background is pretty well made, there are a lot of descriptions for each character and the world around France/Noelle and over all the novel is great and if you want to pass the time this is a novel you should definitely read.
if it means machine translated then no, it's just my writing style, I'm trying to improve so it doesn't look that good as professional and I'm just a fairly new writer