#NoRomanceGang

I would like a picture of the MC

I like the MCs current mentality however if you make him get a wifey it'll ruin his current ruthless mentality so i hope there's no partners as I like how he is

To be honest In a universe we're creating races is possible with enough power having a wife/Dao companion is illogical and simply a weakness

I think he'll be Overpowered with his cheat from the way the story is going i can tell his taking the path of Omniscient

nah I'm not interested in politics

I like it

To be Honest I enjoyed your story but the only downside is that you humanized your Main character too much and both your stories seem to revolve around good and evil , When I think about a super-verse like in your stories the beings you describe have such immense power that mortal humans are literally microbes to these people, I don't think humans seem to care when washing there hands there killing trillions of microbes by your standard isn't that considered a genocide, I think any logical person will care about his advancement to higher ranks in that type of universe no justice or evil exists it's just everyone has there own path some use extreme methods and some use less extreme methods

I think there should be no romance why would someone in cultivation world create a weakness for himself and a burden I Think he reach a level where he transcends humanities constraints so a romance at that point will be useless

so cringe

Well I've heard that the Roukishiki was made by watching animals so I guess it does make it more legit to learn it from them

He's just trying to throw around big words to sound legit

Who The fuck wants to read about some justice hobo please delete your own novel as it's a disgrace to Xanxia

the only thing i don't like is How gay you make the interacrtion between the brothers

Afterall if he considers himself a superior existence to everyone then he should be superior to everyone in their own domain of specialities(Physical strength,Qi,Soul)

TBH Although Elif is supposed to be the most talented person in the Overrealms history he doesn't seem to have the ability to crush the younger generation in their own specialities, I believe if i was Chinese my Comment would be he's not Heaven Defying enough

how about the Crown prince of the dragon clan

Well that's alright he should at least be as tall as Admirals and whatnot

How tall will the MC be will he be a 3meters tall atleast

So how does his physique compare to a dragon