Raven_paw123
I have a lot of incomplete stories.I mainly make each story because I don't know what to write for the others.
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I saw the comic and ordered bleach
-shrug-
only possible explanation 🤷
HE BREATHED
-wheeeeeze- I cant!
Lol
Am I okay? AM I OKAY? *BLEEP* DO I LOOK OKAY?
MOMMA!😱😱
Ima scream louder than my sister when she breaks my eardrums
And possibly become his lunch later.
You're still loved.
So I've heard.
I like it. It's really good. But I have this kind of pet peeve where people just speed the things. On the last few lines, I'll be honest, I'd probably write it so that while the character is walking to the room, he is also thinking. But that's my opinion. Overall, I love the story. Keep up the good work. 🙂