Mastersun

5

That's right, esdes is not esdef, not esme, not esdat, not esmate, and this horror is of no use, in the first chapter, where I did not have time to read even half, the desire to continue reading disappeared.

What kind of game is happening here? Why does one thing occur in one chapter, and in the next, there are some scenes that are incomprehensible and don't hint at anything. It was.

The story was pleasantly surprising. Except for the excessive dose of Chinese flavor, the story is not bad, and the respect given to the author's translation only has a few notable drawbacks. In some parts, the characters' names are in Chinese style.

There is also a young vulture who is not clear who, either Elia's son or Blackfire, you can make him Blackfire, and he will be their enemy along with Littlefinger. 

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I have a strong feeling that I have already read this fiction somewhere, and this is not just a feeling of deja vu, and if after certain events Riser becomes Serafall's lackey,then this story is definitely already on another site, and it was abandoned several years ago.

High Lord is not an official title, and even at official performances, it is said "Lord of Winterfell and Warden of the North", not "High Lord of the North".. Maybe you're right that somewhere there is that high lord of the north, well everywhere I looked, Ned Stark's title is Lord of Winterfell and Guardian of the north, and nowhere is the title high lord mentioned as official. 

It seems to me that the author is not familiar with the canon, since there is a lot of nonsense. What nonsense: The war between the Starks and Boltons is known as a Song of Ice and Fire.

The title of duke in the history of "Game of Thrones" is a little annoying, well, the story is 6.5 out of 10, and the translation, in my opinion, is at a good level, well, this is in my opinion, and I'm not very good in English. And my advice to the translator: replace the Duke of the North with the canonical and familiar title "guardian of the north".