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_Lucky_Clover

_Lucky_Clover

Lv2

Hello, :3 The name's Clover; I'm a new writer who loves reading as much as writing. I hope people can enjoy my work and watch as I grow into a better writer.

2022-06-16 BergabungGlobal
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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
    Balas _Lucky_Clover

    The image is not mine btw.

    It had a big crystal chandelier hanging in the middle and emerald green curtains on the windows. The floor was shiny and glossy; in the middle two guys charged at eachother with immense speed, and as they did, cheers coming from the audience echoed throughout the room.
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    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    This is what the battlefield looks like, if anyone's wondering:

    It had a big crystal chandelier hanging in the middle and emerald green curtains on the windows. The floor was shiny and glossy; in the middle two guys charged at eachother with immense speed, and as they did, cheers coming from the audience echoed throughout the room.
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    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    If anyone's curious, this is what it looks like: (Image's not mine btw)

    The demon towered over her, it stepped closer, pushing Servare back. It was a giant minotaur, holding an equally large sword.
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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
    Balas Rita_152

    Cya and her group got their abilities a long time ago, as well as most of the other students. Arzino's gifted academy doesn't have a specific enrollment period; anybody can enroll whenever, as long as they match the requirements, so most of the students got enrolled a few years back and had time to learn new skills/abilities and train them, unlike Servare, who is both new at being a gifted and attending the Academy. Sorry if I didn't make this clear enough.

    "Fire creation (Lv. 13), Fire manipulation (Lv. 13)"
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    Dunno why this is here either.

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    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    Dunno why this is here. Can't remove it for some reason.

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    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    It's-a-me! The shameless author. You know, I don't really think this story deserves a five-star review, but more of a three-star one; the only reason I rated it a five is because of a quote I once read, it went something like, "If you as the creator don't like your work, then why would anyone else?" So I've been trying to focus on the good things and ignore the bad. But that's not really the focus of this review; this was supposed to be a QnA type of thing, so ask away! :3 though, weird questions will be left unanswered.

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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
    Balas Thiago_guedes

    Good review 👍

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    _Lucky_Clover1yr
    Balas Rita_152

    That's amazing. I didn't think anybody could figure it out, although now, everyone knows what it means. Oh well, it's not that important anyways—good job on figuring it out.

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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
    Balas Rita_152

    What? For real? How?

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    _Lucky_Clover1yr
    Balas Rita_152

    Haha, don't worry it'll get revealed later on.

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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    This is written so well; I wish this were more popular!

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    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    Great first chapter! Hooked me right from the start.

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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
    Balas UneventfulPigeon

    Thank you, I'll try to post longer chapters every other day :)

    Just a question for the 3 people waiting, would you rather I post everyday but the chapters are short or I post every other day but the chapters are long?
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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    Fifth chapter and still no major mistakes; I promised to proofread 5 chapters, and today I just finished proofreading the fifth; well to be honest, it was more like reading than proofreading since I didn't really fix anything. But what I'm trying to say is, I will no longer be a proofreader but instead a regular reader. I hope to read more amazing chapters from you, my friend.

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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
    Balas GoldenLineage

    I appreciate the compliment, thank you very much. <3

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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
    Berkomentar

    I tried to find any major errors worth pointing out, but I inevitably failed. My greatest fear might've just come true; I may no longer be needed. I'm very happy for you; you improved so much. I will keep trying to find any mistakes but I'm pretty sure I won't find that many.

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  • _Lucky_Clover
    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    "and create equipment for himself." Remove "an" from the sentence and you're good. You haven't made a mistake since the last one, i'm impressed. Truly, I can't believe you improved this much within such a small time span. I'm afraid you might not need me anymore, heh.

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    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    "opened the door and entered (the shed.) The smell of alcohol (filled every inch of it,) (making him think about the) hellish life (he once lived.)"

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    _Lucky_Clover1yr
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    "There were only torn carpets and empty alcohol bottles on the floor." You don't have to change this, the original one is okay; this is all optional.

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