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  • Kainedei
    Kainedei4 months ago
    Balas Arkage

    I recommend that you search the internet for the meaning of OP MC and then delete that stupid comment. OP MC doesn't mean MC asshole.

  • Kainedei
    Kainedei4 months ago
    Balas Starwars9901231

    I do not know either.

  • Kainedei
    Kainedei4 months ago
    Balas Starwars9901231

    Type taimanin, then type the name of the character in the search engine and the images will appear.

  • Kainedei
    Kainedei5 months ago
    Balas SaberGilgamesh

    I would recommend that you look on YouTube for a video that talks about Slaanesh from Warhammer and you would understand it.

  • Kainedei
    Kainedei5 months ago
    Balas Zane_Tam

    ... ok

  • Kainedei
    Kainedei5 months ago
    Balas Zane_Tam

    That's why I say again that the problem is the mc. He adapted-, sorry, in a few moments he forgot his entire past life and almost instantly adapted to his new life, including his status and power. that's the problem. If the MC acted as Overlord's Ainz, nothing would happen, but the problem is that the MC has no problem with his new life. That is, he imagines that you reincarnate as another person and from that moment on you will have to live a totally different life than the one you lived before. you understand?. The author said that in MC's previous life he came from an average family, he did not say that he came from a millionaire or billionaire family. And the most important thing, as far as I know, the MC was not an actor in his previous life, therefore, someone must have suspected the MC's change of attitude upon reincarnation, sorry, the MC adapted instantly, so instantly that There was no change in attitude. Now do you understand what I mean?

  • Kainedei
    Kainedei5 months ago
    Balas Zane_Tam

    You're right, but again, the problem is mine alone, I'm not saying that the story is wrong or that the problem has to be corrected immediately or anything like that, I'm just saying that I don't like it, nothing more. Besides, you said it yourself, they are the ones who have been managing the finances of the Ricci family and it is assumed that the MC recently reincarnated. What I mean is that there is no way for those admins to have met the mc before for some to talk to the mc casually or worse, the mc, has no way of knowing them, after all he did not inherit the memories of the body, I think XD, I don't remember well what it was like. but in short, it's a problem I have with the story, just that. If that is corrected later I don't mind continuing reading the story, it's just that these things bother me, they are supposed to be their employees and they treat the MC as if he were their friend. and also, I know that I am not the best person to give an opinion on someone else's story, especially how my writing is, xd. but anyway I like to say what I think and it would be nice if the story improved, after all, there are especially few stories (Fan-Fic) that are at least decent on this page.

  • Kainedei
    Kainedei5 months ago
    Balas Zane_Tam

    If you read below in the comments you will find the answer, but well, what I want to say is the way they deal with the MC. Specifically at the beginning of the story, I don't know if it was chapter 6, 9 or 11, in the chapter that is informed about the state of the SCP organization, the way they talk to the MC is the problem, they don't tell him sir, boss or any honorific, it is as if they were friends or colleagues of the mc for years, even though it is supposed to be the first time they meet the mc.

  • Kainedei
    Kainedei6 months ago
    Balas Kainedei

    The level of writing is fine, the only problem with this story as far as my patience went, chapter 2, is the mc, one thing is being intelligent, another is being an idiot and the mc is an idiot.

Reincarnated in the World of Taimanin [EN]

-Author: "This is not the main story, it is a translation of the Spanish version. I apologize if there are spelling mistakes or if you don't understand what it says, I don't know English to fix it" -Content that will be in the Fan-Fic- Rape, Torture, Pregnancy, Insults, Gore, Slavery, Incest, Mind Control, Zoophilia, Romance, Comedy. -Possibly there is something else (maybe)- I reincarnated in the World (Mega Multiverse ("Canon")) of Taimanin, but upon obtaining the memories of my new body I found out that it is not one of the known worlds of Taimanin. European Union: 1-Austria is a very advanced country in the development of weapons and military equipment, but it is led by a President who is Brainwashed and with great favoritism towards an Austrian Army Captain who is secretly dedicated to slavery and arms smuggling . 2-Germany is a country with a strong system of laws but its intelligence and counterintelligence organization is run by a slave trader with no morals who will not hesitate to enslave or rape a relative of the president or senator. Dark world: The 12 families of noble demons are in their diplomatic games and internal wars as usual, but among the 12 families there is one that is led by a nice and friendly Queen Valkyrie that even an Edwin Black prefers not to bother and an Incubus King Kuroi Ryuuji flees every every time he sees her so as not to seduce her by mistake and end up being a tortoise, blessed by having sex (against his will) with an armor with monstrous strength and resistance.

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