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I see. Thank you for the criticism.
I know, that’s why I said he’s gonna face the Counter Force in later chapters.
That’s true, but he isn’t even connected to the Root. Have you read the fan fiction Fate/Concept? The main character isn’t connected to the Root either, and Alaya and Gaia haven’t even intervened yet. But I’m planning on that type of situation where Ren faces the Counter Force in later chapters.
I see. Sorry if it doesn’t fit to your tastes. Thanks for the criticism though. As for why I chose the system to have no consequences is because that would ruin the whole point of having a system in the first place. The character is supposed to use the system, not the other way around. I’ve seen too many fan fictions with severe system consequences and I hated those. The system is basically forcing the character to do those quests and all of the consequences just make the character suffer. Imagine if you had to do a really hard quest with a high death rate while being under leveled in a game. I’m pretty sure everyone would hate it. Still, thanks for your review.