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Harem?

What should I say about this novel. . before that first thing is first whenever I read this story I get this harem vibes I really hope it isn't one. . Comming to the point It is very good at the start then it's only good and it stays like that for a while then it gets bad like really bad and then again it picks up a little. . but for now its bad so I am dropping it now hope it gets better in the future. . And last but not least, I don't like where the story is going .

It was at the beginning of the story, maybe around the first 7 chapters or so. . Even I didn't like that part so much, but the story gets better after that.

It's a good book. . But you need to change your writing style bro, seriously what's up with these two lines paragraph thing. . You change to the next paragraph before the conversation is even completed

It's not bad. . But somehow I feel disconnected with the MC character. it's not that I hate him(MC) . Overall all a good story. . And the writing Quality could have been better.

it has a good start and all. . but this story isn't for me I don't like MC giving powers left and right to his not so loyal subordinate.

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ooo author where is (Mark) in the side bracket for the conversation

that's good, anyway thanks for the reply man...

I hope it's good and is it going to be a haram i prefer it is not a haram