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I'm thinking single fl for now, but we'll see...
The hero is a fighter who specialize in aura instead of mana. And he just watched the memories, not to totally experienced it. To use magic, 'real' experience is needed. Also, there is a first for everything right? Hopes that answers your question.
it's in the synopsis haha it's not revealed yet in early chaps
what i mean is so much descriptive words but there are little impact, as you said this is a human fighting for the first time. also try to split long paragraphs too as it will make the fight more engaging. that's just my opinion tho. have a nice day
The first chapters is a bit boring but it gets pick up around chapter 5. Things get interesting at this point. I like the hardworking mc as he hoard all achievements tho I can't say that he's cheating. We'll see. Keep it up author.
Man so much descriptive words for attacking rats
I say he's doing good
Finally man, hopefully other readers won't be bored on your info dumping on first chapters
Full of info dumps but ok
Alright good start