Thank you very much , Will work on the upload thing .

This is a great work want to read more , The weak to strong plot always interest me wanna know how this will continue for now this is going great , add more more chapters

This was an amazing fan fiction and and isekai'd in Narutoverse thats cool , I like how you give the readers to choose whatever they want to name weapons and things , Well I will surely want to read more keep going

sure ...😁

Thanks , Will try my best

I was confused by the always changing PoV's but now that it had only four chapters all I can say is its going pretty solid ,The writing is decent atleast all and all its a very good start will see where it goes

I'm so not into romance novel's but still this one looks promising , The fl character looks promising too , the start is solid keep going I think soon it will turn out to be a good novel .

interesting premise will surely follow it but right now there's only 2 chapters so I will wait for more chapters . the swapping perspective with author to the fl is quite strange but will see what happens later on .

Thank you!!

you mean MC right

The story is progressing in a pretty good direction , Involving any kind of mythology in any story make it superb and here you have added all different kind of mythology just a friendly advice in some places grammatical mistakes and in some places the details are not constant like somewhere the creation points are less or somewhere more , But thats okay I guess in grander story those things will not be mattered when the story progress further.

Wow wow woe