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Thank you very much , Will work on the upload thing .
This is a great work want to read more , The weak to strong plot always interest me wanna know how this will continue for now this is going great , add more more chapters
This was an amazing fan fiction and and isekai'd in Narutoverse thats cool , I like how you give the readers to choose whatever they want to name weapons and things , Well I will surely want to read more keep going
I was confused by the always changing PoV's but now that it had only four chapters all I can say is its going pretty solid ,The writing is decent atleast all and all its a very good start will see where it goes
I'm so not into romance novel's but still this one looks promising , The fl character looks promising too , the start is solid keep going I think soon it will turn out to be a good novel .
interesting premise will surely follow it but right now there's only 2 chapters so I will wait for more chapters . the swapping perspective with author to the fl is quite strange but will see what happens later on .