the wishes made the mc seem like he has down syndrome, and the writing is too cluttered and messy. horrible reading experience all round. . . . .

just to respond to the synopsis, ive read things on this website on and off for a while and its only getting worse. there is little to zero moderation on stolen content. at least 30% of all fanfictions here are stolen from wattpad/fanfic/aoe/chinese MTLs or just straight up AI stories.

the physical descriptions of the mc makes me think a 12 year old wrote this. its really hard to read through all the cringe. 8th grade syndrome to the max with this one.

i refuse to believe a human wrote this. the pov changes and the dialogue are so fucking inhuman. . . . . ..............................................

just from the title and synopsis i can tell you either reposted or stole from wattpad or fanfic. net. these novels are of a totally different style to what people post here.

the author cant write 'action scenes' or in this case the games very well. he just describes what happens in a very boring a slightly detailed way. it would be like reading a game review or something, not a novel. so unless you dont care about that which is the entire point of sport stories than this is a waste of time.

the author is taking this hikigaya in the same way as the original anime, making him a self sacrificing loser for the sake of the greater good.

i cant tell if this is an AI novel or a chinese translation and i dont really care, i just know its pure dogshit. . . . . . .....................................................

.... is this a 2011 wattpad novel or something. wtf did i just read in that synopsis. . . . . . . .............................................................................................

whats the the huge influx of fanfic . net novels. getting harder and harder to see an original now. . . . . . . .................................

crazy how almost every well written naruto fanfic is completely ruined by the dogshit 'romance'. every time you write anything to do with romance it becomes too uncomfortable to keep reading, and at a certain point it was too much to skip through without damaging the story. honestly delete all the romance bits and this novel would be way better. either do a harem smut novel or a normal one, dont try do both, never works.

another decently written story ruined by sexual deviance, harems and paedophilia. nice bro you just put yourself on a list for writing that i bet

it reads exactly like a chinese translation. grammatical errors, weird conversations and AU elements, nothing seem right.....................

discount aizen mc. exploits the branch members and is just incredibly unlikeable. he monologues about his greatness all the time, its actually more cringe the more you read. at one point the mc unironically says the most young master shit you will every read, screaming about how he is going to change the world with his talent "or my name isnt hikari hyuga!" so fucking gay

its a healthy attitude. hope he dosent continue to use the curse seal on branch members tho

its decent. a bit slow, also the author posting 10 different patreon tiers for fanfictions was pretty funny. its written well enough, but again, i cant imagine someone actually paying to read it

im petty when drunk, though i agree with drunk me

people on this website have been brain rotted due to 80% of the novels being stolen chinese reposts or things from wattpad/fanfic/aoe

personally didnt want to read past around 50% of the novel but it was great. written very well, story is nice. i just really dislike the idealism of the MC. never liked shirou as a character, too unrealistic. he might as well be called jesus

holy shit the conversations are so fucking bad. chapter after chapter of back and forth conversations where nothing happens because the mc wont believe a single thing anyone ever says without triple checking. this isnt healthy scepticism, its obsessive paranoia bordering on some schizoid behaviour.