Sylvest

writing quality, stability of update, character design are good. Its good to read a romantic story, the starting is well. But the confusion between Ml is interesting. I cant say who is the Ml after reading the first 10 chapters. But whatever it is i like paul's personality. I think he is the Ml but if he if make him a good character, his character seems villain. BUt it's your story i am just giving my opinion.

this kind of love makes me laugh and i enjoy it. it likes i can't have but i can you forcefully,.

i see so he ias ml

is he villain or ml?

starting is good

should i give spoiler? :v

should i give spoiler? :v

i yhink its not friendship its love

does he like adela?

interesting, but i am looking forward to see the culprit