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i am really hoping you make me change your review, havent removed from my lbrary because the concept it great and your story is above average despite the flaws i think it has.
i would suggest changing the cover to be of fugaku as this fic is good but it doesnt do anything to diffrentiate it from chinese mtl trash due its name and cover.
the idea is great but the execution is shit, remove the system influence except the stauts, dont make him lick everyone's ass by saying my lord, dont make it harem or sex, i really hope you do something that makes me change mt review
fucking bullshit
fucking my lord bullshit, just drop this fic yourself man, you would be doing a favor
dont fucking make him kneel, he is the fucking prince of asgard, just dont
dont do missions, keep the sstem to just telling how strong he is, anything more it would be bad
good transition,
please translate Source : Marvel: Spider-Man Begins Spoilers 漫威:从蜘蛛侠开始剧透 Author: 天之佑祈 other translator does have 108 chapters but that only in 2 chapters a day, if you can do faster, do it
WOW, no fic has ever left me with all positives. like I have read till chapter 21 and idk why but I love and hate it. Its excellent and its sometimes just touching the idk average category. I am so so confused on my take on this fic. Idk how i feel about this, but its positive. I have no words to explain my feeling. I like the premise and writing, and there are things i somewhat disliked, like the part where he just says "but he knew better" but at the same time it feels finny as hell for it to recur. I am at crossroads but as of 21, i will say its an 8.5 with the potential to be a 9.5 or a 7, and I just cant comment on its future.