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Cardboard text with blank characters. There are no emotions, no feelings, no stories. The people in this work are like stupid robots. They don't question, feel, or interact. The main character is the same. I won’t talk about dozens of other disadvantages, because that’s already enough. Just imagine the average dialogue in this story: Heroine (A) greets Heroine (B) = eternal friendship and strong relationship. There is no dialogue, no recognition, nothing. As if the text was written not by a person, but by a damn GPT CHAT. I don't know why there is such a high rating here. The main character is stupid and flat, the environment is dead. English is not even my 3rd language, but even I see hundreds of logical errors in the text. I don’t recommend this to anyone, even the translation from Chinese would be better than this, ugh!

I am writing via Google Translit. The story itself about the “villain” begins only in chapter 181. Before this, the system simply did not exist. Basically this novel is about a “slice of life”. The novel is good and that's all, there is nothing original or special that would not have been shown by the Chinese brothers. Now let's move on to the disadvantages, and there are quite a few: Our hero is not very smart, but very arrogant. He would have been killed 10 times already if there were no plot armor. Especially his overconfidence when facing those who can score with his flick. A system that makes no sense at all is very annoying: all the bonuses of the system, all the rewards and everything else are completely useless to him and he gives it to his useless harem. Our hero is symp. I don't see any bonuses from the system: physiques can't be acquired by our main character, the villain's points are used for some crap. The biggest disappointment is that even the women next to him are not much weaker than him, despite the fact that our hero has a “super-duper physique.” You need a lot of forced plots that can only be in a book. The same military service for 2.5 years. Sounds cool, but in reality? The heir with hundreds of billions of dollars went to work as a minor military man. It would be nice if he stayed in the world, but he will be out of there within 10 years. Yes, he doesn’t even spoil some of the women next to him, waiting for them to “ripe”. The villain behaves more like the main character. And these constant nerfs and inability to kill the hero.

Chad stopped being Chad and became a Beto bitch. I won't even start reading this, I'll just leave an angry comment here for ruining a story that could have been completed in 2-3 chapters and enjoyed a wonderful aftertaste. It's a good thing the author jumped off the bridge, Beta Bitch-sama.

The story was strong 5, not counting the dialogues, which were not there. But it all went down to 1, because of the ending. There is no point in the quality of the writing, the characters and the world if everything the character has achieved is simply thrown away. This is the NTR of the main character in the social, strength and mental sense. You know, if I knew the ending of the story, I simply wouldn’t start reading it.

I am the one who abandoned history because of another imposed slave system. Everything was fine and wonderful until the moment where the system forces him to “steal Natasha’s heart.” In fact - slavery of the main character and a huge fine for nothing if he fails to do this. And I don’t like Natasha, as an almost 100-year-old whore (It’s not because she’s Russian, I’m Russian myself!) It’s simply physically impossible to imagine a relationship with a progmatic, callous, professional spy woman.

I have read this to the end. It's really a good story. I love it when the main character suffers and breaks through the hardships and there is 100% suffering, effort and planning in this book. I recommend it to all beginner gardeners!

The best soup ever. With sour cream and black bread. I advise all non-Russians to try it.

I would give 4.5 stars maybe 5 stars. Beautiful text, hero, narration, new secrets, but there is one pain No: He kills pirates, kills other people, but always protects the main pirate, from whom there should be a reward. This is such stupidity that it's just terrible. They scream at him that they will take revenge, kill his loved ones, find his house and so on, and he just ignores it. Rapists, murderers, extortionists, arsonists, just weak trash will be spared. The first time, I ignored it, but the second time, when he even sewed his leg back on, cured him and stuff? Just disgustingly illogical, as for Vlad Dracula, he never spared his enemies and their families. Ugh. If it will be 3 times, even despite the beautiful text, the magnificent character and the living world, I will give it up and, to be honest, I really don’t want to.

And it's always annoying. The protagonist who can't live his life and immediately decides to "not change the plot". It's disgusting. Some stupid fan, not the main character. This is not Naruto, where if you do something the world will end or the same Dragon Ball. This is One Piece. Have fun, drink, kill, become a lookout, rape, break people, fishermen, minks or create havoc, but don't be that kind "pirate" who helps everyone, not himself, motherfucker.

It's well written. The main character is bright and likable. But there will always be shit. Let's start with my main claim: The main character gives his fruit to Logia and it is no longer Ace. 2. He goes to Nami's village and kills Arlong, and then when she wants to join his team, he says in all seriousness that he does not want to break the canon, when he already killed Arlong and for some reason takes Nami's sister with him, which, according to the canon, does not understand navigation. And here is the most interesting thing, why do you write fanfiction and everything else, if, in fact, everything will be the same as in the canon, only with a stronger main character? The author also justifies himself in the comments that, without Nami, Luffy will die and so on.